This was a marvelous musical tribute to the flying horse and the sounds most skillfully controlled by your conductor. However sme of the words were swallowed as the horse galloped ever faster and it is important that every word is clearly understood. Nevertheless the harmonious blending if voice was skillful and the poet’s intention clearly conveyed.

Well done. You spoke every word with care-concentrating on each phrase as you spoke it. Now try to allow phrases to flow easily, pausing between each image. Also change pitch with each new idea. Some very good expression in the latter half of the work.

A gentle vocal tone. Very good – first verse was atmosphere – you caught the mood of the poem. Now slow down, think about pause. Aim for clarity of diction. L, N, Th need care. A promising performance.

Well presented. Genre needs to be well considered. Do project adequately throughout and enunciate very clearly. Did have varied phrasing. Well tried.

A little quiet. Try to project more consonant clusters and little difficult. Different color given to various words. Some variety found, but needs more thought. Well tried.

A gentle vocal tone – make sure that you project right to the back. Some expression shown – can you use facial expression to help? Relax your hands by your side. Promising work.

You tried to hard as you spoke your poem – and you stood well up them on the platform. Keeping doing exercises to help flexibility of tongue and tips for crisp, clear consonants. A fair try –well done.

You really concentrated as you spoke the words of the poem. A quiet but nevertheless clear voice – well done. Now have the confidence to speak out to the back of the room and show the feeling in the words. Well done.